Emotions are speaking here
The only place I see you,
are in my dreams this is matching for many one..
a perfect poem

This poem shows a lot of emotion, I liked it very much. Great job Omar!

"You were the light that guide
me from the dark,
but now with you gone,
I am lost" ...

I felt it right here; this really expressed a deep emotion. Beautiful, short, and sad. 5/5.

I like this, you did a great job! :)

This poem is so beautiful words cant even describe good job :)

There is a lot of emotion here. It's sad and leaves the reader feeling sorry. There is a lot we can relate to.

So sad.
it's amazing how
well-a person can express
how they feel when it comes to heartbreak.

good write. :)

This is one of my fave's as of right now:), I can relate to it..

And the only place I can be with you is in my dream but how sad that even in my dream is it him that you always wanted...lol hahah

I like this,;p

I liked this one but i feel it could use a little work, something seems to be missing and there's a few errors in tense but still good, 4/5

I love you,
with all my heart
but I guess you didn't care,
because you rip it up.

...I REALLY Love this line., It seems like me loving someone who really don't care..

Aww a heartbreaking piece. But beautifully written.

There are a few errors regarding tense such as:

second stanza;
'but I guess you DIDN'T care,/ because you RIP it up'
should be either .. DON'T and RIP or DIDN'T and RIPPED

third stanza;
depending on which tense you use (past or present)...
GUIDE should be GUIDED or GUIDES

Your title;
I like it, but I the surprise of what it was about was given away in the first line. I guess a positive about this is that it was straight to the point. (:

You have expressed your self really well in this piece... the pain of heartbreak... the despair... the loss of hope... etc.. Well done!

Overall;
A really great write.
Even though this person chose to leave, there is no need to give up hope or have suicidal thoughts! This person just wasn't your future - there's plenty of fish in the sea, so get back out there and catch another. LOL (:

Excellent. 5/5

Amazing, really well versed! deserves a 5/5

Sad simple and to the point I like it hun

Really good i like it

So nice

This is simply a beauty! Too bad it didn't win the weekly... Would have been a jewel on the front page....
Keep on writing and reading poetry