Faded love

Another beautiful piece, another enjoyable read.

Thanx all fr bein nyc to me.

Good poem with nice metaphors.

But like the clouds your love will form again and will unleash nurturing rain on your field of hope.

Great piece! But I see it still need some improvement starting from the fourth line.
The fourth line 'now it is a forgotten map.' should be 'now it became a forgotten map, like the winter raindrops'
What I mean a comma after 'map' and 'the number of' should be removed.
So the final shape of the poem should be as follows:

As I stood there,
stood to watch the clouds fading,
fading away like the love I once held dearly,
now it became a forgotten map, like the winter raindrops.

"winter raindrops" -- i like that.

Great poem, Shanix.