Black heart

by Kelwin lost in thought   Aug 23, 2012


You say I have a black heart
you say that I was unfathful

who was it who left me broken
who was it who was cheating

you say I never leave you
you say I'm cold

who left me
who stuck me in the back

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  • 13 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is really powerful :) You done an amazing wonderful job!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Karla

    Nice poem.

  • 13 years ago

    by Darren

    Powerful, really angry piece.

    just a couple of nits

    unfathful should be unfaithful

    In the last line should stuck be stabbed?

    otherwise nice short, straight to the point piece.

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