Decay

by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA   Aug 28, 2012


Like autumn's leaves
rose petals wilt;
slowly dying:
day by day,
hour by hour,
minute by minute,
second by second.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Such beauty within this poem. Describing the slow process of withering leaves/petals. Bon Travail! :} ..

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I agree with beautifully constructed comment. Simplicity is an excellent technique.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Beautifully constructed!
    Hope you win!
    5.5 from me!