My fear

by DarkLight   Sep 2, 2012


It is fear,
fear of not being able to look at you.
My eyes are filled with tears,
tears of pain for losing you.
I hope this you hear,
I still love you dear.

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  • 8 years ago

    by anand singh

    What a beautiful but sad piece that speaks volume of the pain that follows a broken heart. Very touching indeed. An enjoyable read.

  • 10 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    This is pretty powerful to my soul for I think my soul would say something similar to this work of art :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    This is sad when you want to be around that person but you can't it tear's you up inside sad & heartfelt piece p&l midnight sky

    • 10 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Wrote this piece after i lost my GF, day after day can't stop thinking of her...Thanks Midnight Sky

  • 11 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    This sounds like a Chorus of a very sad song,
    and it sounds beautiful
    as for not being able to look @ your loved ones eye, I believe it shows that you aren't proud of what you've accomplished!
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by DarkLight

    @Everlasting and Abed thank n for the mistakes i will rectify