My Baby you Will be....

by Lost Soul   Sep 19, 2012


Your scent still lingers on the pillow
next to mine, and I see your
lovely smile every time I close my eyes.
I long to be with you, if only for a
minute that won't last. I know you've
gone and left me but I can't forget the past.

It's hard to always lose when
you never seem to win, you told
me that you loved me then you went
to be with him.

I know we had our differences
I know we had our flaws,
but I'm begging for forgiveness
can you hear my fleeting calls.

I think of all the things I'll miss
your bashful eyes and supple skin.
The warmest touch and sweet embrace,
your flowing hair my fingers traced.

I never asked to be soft spoken
but when I speak my words
sound broken. I think of all the
things we did, and all times we shared a kiss.
The long walks taken in the park and
how we cuddled in the dark.

These things fade to memories and
someday into long lost dreams,
I miss you darling and that is all,
I'm through waiting for your call.
I guess it wasn't meant to be,
that is something I now see...

But to me babe, my baby, you will always be.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Two words.....Awe.....Some!!!

    You got serious chops!! You have a great rhyming brain which allows you to create these pieces that flow very elegantly, i like that :-) i also love the almost desperate tone at the beginning and how by the end is strong, this is a great write and i cant wait to read your next piece :-)

    5/5 all over the shop :-)

  • 11 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    I loved this piece. It flowed well and had a lovely rhyme scheme. Sadly, I just have one slight issue....

    You use the same punctuation for EVERYTHING! Try to change it to add emphasis, tone or to help the reader read it.

    Loved it though <3