Disappointment (mini mono verse)

Ohhhhh you have done a crazy form too! Now I know where Darren got that form from, lol

I LOVE IT! I dont think I read it though, I think I sang it, hehe :P

Amazing tara. You done well. Its good to know such kind of poetry. Thanks for posting.

Woo hoo

I have a new form to try.

love hells dinner,

so tight, so fast and great rhyming.

did I say woo hoo?

Well I guess I have to hold my hands up and say I was wrong I've read it again and it's a lot more powerful than the surface words

You did well with my challenge :)

So true :)

Love this little piece of humour and truth...