I want her with me

It was short but very beautiful.. I think it comes straight from your heart, well done. I have some suggestions though xD try to capitalize al the I's

Nonetheless another fine written piece by you!

Awwww how cute i like this one alot

awww this is cute, Ilike how you write, its simple and simple is always good, good job...LiL One

awesum job luv heather

cute, really sweet.