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by Dixie Sinoro Ebanit   Sep 24, 2012


Mirrored memories
and self-created fantasies
stuck on replay
shuffles my thoughts
records the regrets
and loops the pain

Side A.
The pain.
The memories.
It hurts to reminisce.
The pain -- twisting this heart of mine.
If only, if only I could turn back the time.

Pause.
I miss you.
Please come back.
I want to hear your voice.
I want your love again to be mine.
I want was once 'ours' shall be ours one more time.

Play.
It hurts.
It hurts to see you.
It hurts to hear your voice.
It hurts to remember the memories.
It hurts to know you failed to save our love.

Stop.
I want to forget.
I want to move on.
I want to face life without regrets.
I want to smile without any hint of pain.
I want to be happy -- truly happy once again.

Open.
I let go.
I set myself free.
I'll be moving on from now.
I'll be living without any love-worries.
I'll be living without you -- that I promise.

Side B.
A new me.
A new life.
A new chapter begins.
Smile rests upon my crimson lips.
Happiness fills my heart in with bliss.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is creative and cute.lol. but your poem is great and amazing.
    Pls keep writing(:

  • 8 years ago

    by William

    I see in a comment that you said this was the first poem you wrote. It's honestly an amazing start! I like the way it was set up.

    5/5 definitely

    • 8 years ago

      by Dixie Sinoro Ebanit

      That's correct! i just had the guts to create one because i was emotionally upset on that time!

    • 8 years ago

      by Dixie Sinoro Ebanit

      Thank you for 5/5 vote. I really appreciate it! I am now inspired to create more...

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    It wasn't anything major....just your opening stanza that I would like to talk about...

    Mirrored memories
    and self-created fantasies
    stuck on replay
    shuffle my thoughts
    record the regrets
    and loop the pain

    I've just deleted the 's's....for your consideration. Normally I don't like all the I's you have here but....I think it works here....so...I wouldn't change them in this case.

    • 8 years ago

      by Dixie Sinoro Ebanit

      Thank you. I don't wanna elaborate why there was an "S" since you've mentioned that it works with my poem.
      Thanks again!

  • 8 years ago

    by Dixie Sinoro Ebanit

    Thank you for the compliment. This is the first poem i wrote. I was very depressed when i wrote this. Can you please tell me what few little typos were you referring to? I'm open for comments and suggestions for my own betterment.
    Thanks a lot!

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    I actually really like this...honestly I do!...I didn't know anyone actually owned records apart from me but...it's a good idea! I still have heaps of records but nothing now to play them on haha!!!

    Anyway...back to the poem...you have a few little typos here but...I know english is not your first language so....look it over again...if you need some help pm me ok?

    I just loved the fact that...records sometimes stuck and you played well with that fact and...of course, every one had a B side which...generally wasn't the best but....you swung that around too....I really liked it!