Goddess

by Stephen   Oct 13, 2012


She fills the emptiness in my heart
with the love she has within hers;
finishes my sentences when
I've only spoken half the words.

Showering me with her care and love
like mother nature does the Earth.
I love her more than words can express;
she's an angel I don't deserve.

Her smile illuminates a room
more intense then sun rays
beaming through multiple windows.
The beauty she shares with
the world cannot be matched
by anyone past or present;

She's a goddess in human form.

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  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    She fills the emptiness in my heart
    with the love she has within hers;
    finishes my sentences when
    I've only spoken half the words.

    lovely piece ..stephen..

  • 13 years ago

    by L

    Wow wow

    I' am not a doggy but I can still wow.
    I like this poem Stephen, Goddess. It runs smoothly except on one part where it says sun rays beaming through every window... I am not sure if that was just me but I usually semi stop when there is a line break and that's what I did with that line.

    When I read it I sort of stop at Sun rays

    So my suggestion is move the "beaming" to the next line.

    More intense than sun rays
    Beaming through every window.

    Sort of like that.

    Well, I guess it's better to wait until someone else suggests lol. It might just be me. Other than that, I like this. It felt real.

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