Walk on water

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Nov 7, 2012


Gravity is banished
With out wings I sore,
With your love,water
becomes a solid path,
come walk with me.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    I like this. It shows few words, but with where my heart rests in life right now the interpretation I got from this went deep! I 'heard' you say that nothing is impossible when it comes to love. That I shall not have wings, yet I can still fly. And how water is not solid but I can still walk on it like it was a sidewalk.

    I enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing!

    *BrittBratt*

  • 11 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    I dig the way you used very few words to describe how this love is not bound by laws of gravity.

    Your writes are evolving Tony.
    (Even though I've only been around a few months, I see it.)

    P.S. sore should be soar.

    Well penned. =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This is awesome, you're like Jesus in this poem, walking on water and all!! That's totally the image I got hehe

    Tony this piece is perfect. I wouldn't add anything or shorten anything, I think its beautifully simplistic and describes such a passion filled love that makes you want to walk on water.

    Awesome :)

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By The Poet Behind The Poems