TONY

This is a fantastic/reflective piece about yourself I think intentional or not. Well played

You done well on this challenge too and I appreciate the angle you chose to take for this write, honest and reflective. Great choice.

You done well on this challenge too and I appreciate the angle you chose to take for this write, honest and reflective. Great choice.

I like this poem a lot, because it does say so much in such a few lines. Writing a good acrostic is more difficult than people realize to be honest, but you did well here. I love that you wrote a love letter to yourself. BUT lets spin this around,

IF you did not say what you said at the end of the poem, you could say you wrote this through the eyes of someone who loves you dearly. and that in itself it difficult to do. and I would say you did well in that. Writing a perspective poem is hard enough but writing one through the eyes of someone else is damn hard, I love the details you put into this as well though. You give the reader a chance to see the poem and you showed us what love is really like, IN in weird way :P. but this poem is excellent in it's attempt. 5/5

Thing I said on the challenge thread how good this was, Tony. "Only for salt to sour your taste" Great line. This was one of quite a few of those excellent name acrostic poems.