Disapear

Thanks.... I may do that:)

Very sad, but also very relate-able.
Might I suggest changing:
"Because I have spent the few years
With that fear
that no-ones
or seems to care about"

to something like...

"Because I've spent few years
with the fear
that no one cares"

That's the only stanza that seems to be out of rhythm with the rest or the poem, in my opinion. But I really liked the rhythm throughout and the way you portrayed your pain.

I'm with Blood of the Lion, sometimes when you think something isn't so great, other people may. Well written. (:

I thought it was good and you can't ever really say what your best work is or what isn't :) words can have a completely different taste to someone than what you might be trying to convey.

Just remember to look up. The sky is still there :)
5.5

Sad poem, well written!
P.s:title should be "Disappear" not "disapear!"

Not my best...I'll admit...but I tried...maybe I will rewrite it