Snow

by Abbie   Nov 16, 2012


When winter winds blow
hedges to and fro
and flapping crow
has gone to his home
long ago

Then I know
Snow
will quietly fall, grow
overnight higher than houses below
stop the stream in its flow
and so
in a few hours, show
itself mans ancient foe
Oh
how slow
is the silent gathering of snow.

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  • 13 years ago

    by silvershoes

    What a beautiful poem with an excellent rhyme scheme. Unforced and light. You gave me a feeling of peace. Thank you :)

  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    Love the imagery and peaceful feeling in the poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is really amazing, loved how this rhymed and the pace it had.

    Very well done, Abbie:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    This is a very beautiful piece, be proud of yourself and keep writing.

    I liked this part in particular:

    "Then I know
    Snow
    will quietly fall, grow
    overnight higher than houses below
    stop the stream in its flow"

    Your poem flows like a stream 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 13 years ago

    by lillie

    Love this poem about snow
    its a great write 5/5

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