Personification

by Abbie   Nov 27, 2012


The moon is staring down mysteriously
at the dark, dank streets below.
The sun is waiting patiently, it's sleeping,
getting ready to come out, to cry 'hello.'

The sky is full off dancing stars,
while the street is heavy breathing.
With so much hustle and bustle,
those naughty, late children quickly leaving.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Someone Invisible

    Great job babe I do believe I'm one of those naughty late childern right now lol

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Remarkable, Abbie!

    You indeed made the world seem like a breathing and living person..and maybe in a way, it is!

    Well done:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 13 years ago

    by Amreen

    Wonderful!!
    Abbie, at your age, you have a touch of newness still retaining the innocence you possess.. I love this piece, it reminds me of my kindergarten poems... Ones which had simplicity in them..
    Keep writing:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Wild flower

    OMG O.O
    The picture you drew here is breath taking, awesome job Abbie:)

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