"You just melted in my arms and tears started flowing,
You hugged me tight with our love just growing & growing"
^^^ In this last line, you only need one "growing". It still fits the flow amazingly.
Well... you know... this is so sweet, even I almost cried. Let me start by wishing you and [from the way it sounds] beautiful wife a fantastic life together :)
I liked the rhyme you put in the poem. A bold move with some but love is bold so yeah. :)
"This moment of extreme love ended with kisses all around,
I love you I told you in your love forever I have drowned."
^^^ this one is definitely my favorite part of the poem, no doubt. Now, if you dont mind me asking, how long have you two been married? By this poem, it seems recent or maybe you're just an expert at making old flames reappear.
This poem captures the heart of the reader and it makes you feel the love. It's a beautiful piece. :)