27 billion an 36 poeple ..

by LouSang   Nov 27, 2012


27 billion an 36 people ..
all look the same an personalities are equal ..

wear the same clothes an wear the same shoes ..
spark up a fag or gulp down that booze ..

rush for the bus an barge out the way ..
gossip an slag off an totally betray ..

all greedy for money, they always want more ..
children at home, but there work comes before ..

kids in the streets with there coloured spray cans ..
skinny's an cap backs an worn out old vans ..

boys in there cars with the girls in the back ..
meetin there dealers for poppers an crack ..

the world, it aint changin .. forever be the same ..
theres no one to point at, cause were all here to blame!

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  • 11 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Well done litany of issues without solutions. Although you cast it in a pessimistic tone I can't help feeling that you would change whatever you can in your own world. Think global act local as they say.
    Sometimes it is hard to carry off a rhyme scheme in long lines, but yours comes off good - essentially you have four line stanzas run together as two lines each, but without having to worry about the breaking points.
    Good job.

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