Omniscient Being 2

by Robert   Dec 12, 2012


I burn with passion, I brighten the night
I turn smoldering heat into metal and light
The sky turns crimson, it calls my name
You try to keep warm within my flame

I melt our sorrows, I dry up your tear's
I ignite the horror found in your fear's
We know I am hot, and can burn one's touch
Yet we still in awe undoubtedly clutch

No one can confine me
I embellish our dreams
Im a singular, an omniscient
Who burns through everything

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  • 11 years ago

    by yogi73

    This is a very well done poem. I can't believe it hasn't gotten more attention. The message is intense. Great story you have told here.

    I felt this line didn't flow quite as well as all the others:
    "Yet we still in awe undoubtedly clutch"

    maybe reword...?
    "Still in awe, we undoubtedly clutch"
    just my thoughts.

    I'll dig into more of your stuff.