Comments : The world

  • 10 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    ~ Beautiful narration and well written!
    5/5!

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a lot to learn from this world, from the simple things in life till the big ones..nice read.

  • 10 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    I love this so much :))

    I love the imagery of the first verse... the train, the tickets ... just simply awesome :))

    The second verse... I can feel a longing... The time frames make the scenes more vulnerable and great :))

    I love the last verse... It's very true :)) The world has its own ways of making us know all the thing we must learn... It can be in a meeting or the things around us :)) Great job :)) Well-written :)) 5/5

    --- MKKK

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Oh yeah, the last stanza has much truth.
    Somethings are considered amazing yet a mystery while others aren't, I guess that's just the way the world works..

    I also like the first stanza, and the hello being as simple formality.. Well written.