~ Beautiful narration and well written!
5/5!

There is a lot to learn from this world, from the simple things in life till the big ones..nice read.

I love this so much :))

I love the imagery of the first verse... the train, the tickets ... just simply awesome :))

The second verse... I can feel a longing... The time frames make the scenes more vulnerable and great :))

I love the last verse... It's very true :)) The world has its own ways of making us know all the thing we must learn... It can be in a meeting or the things around us :)) Great job :)) Well-written :)) 5/5

--- MKKK

Oh yeah, the last stanza has much truth.
Somethings are considered amazing yet a mystery while others aren't, I guess that's just the way the world works..

I also like the first stanza, and the hello being as simple formality.. Well written.