'til i die

by Tim Bradshaw   Jun 30, 2004


Until my final breathe is breathed,
I swear I will be true.
I meant every word I've ever said,
Til I die I'll be with you.

Every moment I am snug close to you,
You make my heart melt.
This feeling your presence has put on me,
Is one that I've never felt.

I love the way your eyes stare at me,
Your smile is so pure.
From the first day I laid eyes on you,
I knew that we were sure.

I can't see myself lying next to another,
I swear with all I am.
I want to be with you forever,
And someday have a fam.

Please take every word as the truth,
Cause to you I'll never lie.
I want you to be by my side,
Forever 'til I die.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ¤Brenda¤

    Aw... prettyful!

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Awwwwww... I'm so envious of you're girl-friend right now . She is a lucky lady, and if she has you twisted up in love this way you're a lucky man . I really don't no how to comment or compliment you anymore . You tend to leave me speechless . Only faults that I can see that you have is Capitilization, but most of all of us has that problem . Don't even sweat it in due time you can remedy that fault . Keep up the excellent work .

    You're friend
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Robin

    Aw, that was a SWEET poem. I wish I had a guy to tell me that. I just have these retarded gangsta idiots. :( I love your work.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    That was such a cute poem. You know it's a good poem because as i was reading it i could put a picture in my head of what you were talking about. It was lovely.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jdawg

    Great poem and it was very well written ! Keep up the good work
    Thanks for the comments

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