Final Fight

by Thomas   Dec 18, 2012


You struck me down
harder than life itself
Soft skin, little hands
hitting harder than a sledgehammer
The sun went dark
my eyes decided to close
To enjoy this defeat,
the ecstasy of this surrender
I drop flat on the canvas
pushing all the pillows
so that you can grab hold
of my powerless limbs
Bend me in the desired shape
and lay yourself in my arms.
Now we can lay together
and form a perfect symbiosis.
The fight is over.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is a beautiful piece and shows love with its true essence.
    This line acted brilliant in your piece:
    "and form a perfect symbiosis"
    Excellent :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh my,

    Thomas your writing, I just love the improvement, the depth you go into now, the creativity, it keeps getting more raw and more beautiful and I'm just loving it...Very passionate write doll!

  • 13 years ago

    by Unknown

    You surrender, you let her control in the bedroom...and you love it. I see this as a playful game between two lovers of who has the power at which time.

    This piece has great imagery and full of passion, I love it. :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Let It Be

    Absolutly amazing i love the line
    "and form a perfect symbiosis"

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