Small

This isn't small enough, I reckon with a bit of effort you could have got this down to 16 words.............
Only joshing with you.
This is like a little punch, but what does it mean I wonder?
To me it reads as if you write poems at dusk or dawn, you find that strength to write when all is quiet, when you can have time to yourself. Maybe inbetween your life is fairly hectic or you spend a lot of time helping others.
A mortal spirit?
Can you be a spirit if you are mortal?
Or is this someones strength, a different kind of spirit?
Does somebody who writes inspire you with their strength of character, do they inspire you to write?
Is that person me? (only joking again!!)

I may be so far off the track that I may as well be reading something else but this is how it reads to me.
I thought and still think it is great.

Only you can create this much power in 20 words.

Hugs for you x

@.@!!!

Small poem
with a huge amount of soul...
I sense a sad element to the write but it has a loving heart welded in it.

<3

When you said that small poems can be the best, and hold the most meaning, you were not wrong, this is awesome, I love how the title is simple and enticing, and then when you read it, you get a sense of what we are here.

Just such a nice little write, it made me smile.
x

Small thats true, but huge in what ut says:)

LOVE this pieve!!