Allow Me

by Chelsey   Jan 10, 2013


I want everything about you. Don't pack a bag,
don't think twice about changing, I want you in
your most natural form. Here in this moment,
I want to crash into all that you've become-
and adapt it to my world.

If you've never been catered to, then give me the
pleasure of grazing my adoration across your
face and pressing my desires in between your
lips. Allow me to occupy your time the right way-
exemplifying what you're deserving of.

If just for right now, let me make you feel utterly
important. Let my persistence show you the
worth you hold. For, your name has a crest
that is stamped on my heart. A symbol that says-
Cherishable.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Beautiful. I love the powerful words here that make it so unique... grazing, desires ,exemplifying, utterly etc.

    When we love someone it should be for all that they are.

    "Let my persistence show you the
    worth you hold."

    - I liked this line because it shows the determination to show this person their beauty and their true self when perhaps they do not see it themselves. It shows that in love you take the hardest challenges such as these and with all your power you try to fix it. To show someone what they are really worth and make them believe it is one of life's most precious gifts, it is something they will never forget.

    A symbol that says-
    Cherishable.

    - love your ending, showing what they mean to you and cherishable is such a loving word and creates a clear picture of just how important this person is to you.

    I also like your title choice because you are asking permission to be able to show this person the things above. You are asking for one chance to be able to show them what it is that you see.

    Love it, well done. 5/5

    Good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Chelz, you write the most beautiful love poems I've ever read... breathtaking piece!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    When a heart knows the words flow... Chels, you penned elegance here... its billowy... like a cloud.. I visioned you perched on a cloud singing this to the one your heart writes of... this is beautiful!

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is a beautiful poem chels

    I love your word choice

    Awesome

  • 12 years ago

    by Rusheena

    This is amazing, so candid and vivid! Very beautiful, Chelsey. <3

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