Lighthouse

Indeed. This I find a bit sad,
but the sincerity that lays beneath
this piece truly is amazing!! <3

Wow, Andrea...this was just really so beautiful and touching...I love the little parts you added to make it you, the addition of your street name, and just everything was so finely penned.

One thing though, I think "Beckon" should be "Beacon" but otherwise, just beautiful and such a heartfelt dedication here.

xx

Amazing fourth stanza. That really clinched this for me. A classical poem, good choice of subject, nice flow of emotion, honest. I also notice again this vagueness that I've read in other poems of yours.

Good, solid work :)

-Ares

This is just beautiful!!! Seriously, beautiful..

Love the personal touch at the end there...love the representation of lighthouse!...and I love that writing about the situation helps you, I know it is, I can tell.

I love you!

I love it how you spit your feelings in an amazing piece, flawless. The tone here is really sad, but sincere love and appreciation is felt through out the poem:)
Thats great awesome job as always:)