You Failed...HAHA

by Natasha   Jan 28, 2013


You believe that -
Since I'm still breathing,
that none of my suicide attempts worked.

But they all DID -
I'm dead inside,
and I'm never coming back.

I'm gone forever.
And all I'm waiting for is,
my body to finally catch up.

You'll know this,
because you laughed at me.
Okay? :)

(C) NAC. Natasha~

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  • 9 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Absolutely
    hauntingly
    artistically
    dark poem u have written

    I mean I totally connect
    people think that if u fail
    that you're a survivor
    but really you've succeeded

    ... something inside u is gone forever

  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    Nice talking poem. But please avoid the words like suicide and death.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Wow I trully love it. I feel so much like that. I've failed so many times at suicide.

    • 11 years ago

      by Natasha

      Know that you're not alone in this, Kelwin.
      You're never really alone, you just think you are.

      Okay? :)

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I don't know if I should take the laugh as sarcasm... But it does sound.. Though, it really is a sad piece.

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    So terribly sad. The smile at the end, is so tauntingly dark and intense. It's a little bit scary.
    But a great write.<3 xoxo

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