When we fell apart

by April Rose   Feb 12, 2013


You were the one I gave everything to
Every secret I had you knew
But that wasn't enough
So now I am pretending to be tough
And this is my biggest bluff

Everything we had
Fell apart so bad
And now I just don't know
How to live without sorrow

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  • 11 years ago

    by Guy Epsilon

    I really enjoyed the first stanza, it was very emotional and honest. I felt the pain in it.

    The second stanza seemed to lack that luster. I am no expert but it lacked the emotion that was present in the beginning.

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