Your Eyes [Tanka]

by Rusheena   Feb 14, 2013


Time freezes, when I
look into your flickering
eyes that melt away
every shred of modesty
hindering me from your lips.

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  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    It's nice to read such a short poem that says as much as this one. Good job

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Great tanka. You appear brilliant in this poem. I loved it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Ohhh very nice, great job.

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