Invisible Rays [Tanka]

by Rusheena   Feb 15, 2013


Time fades with the sun,
as it evolves around me.
Yet, it hesitates
to shine any rays of truth
on a cold heart, starved of love.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Very indepth meaning here
    excellent poem keep writing like this.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, you hold a talent for these formed ones by far!

    This was very deep for a tanka and created a little image of loneliness for me. WEll done