Bounded (Senryu)

by Meme   Feb 20, 2013


Released your promise
shall be; for another has
signed his life with mine.

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© Copyright 2013 by: gIrL
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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very nice little senryu. Well done xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    "another has signed his life with me"

    you took this romantic senryu to the moon with that ending line... whoot!

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      I am all for the romance ;)
      Thanks Maple ..

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh Meme,
    What a heart pulling senryu, I agree with Natasha, you do have a knack for love poetry and the conviction and the power in those three lines really resonates deep.

    I love it :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks Tara :)

  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!!

    You have a knack for love poetry missy,
    Nicely penned.

    Strong meaning for a short piece :)

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