by Dominique Lewis Feb 22, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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The clock keeps ticking and it seems like it will never stop, |
by xXx Eternal PainxXx
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OMG!!!!! wow i don't know what to say...i'm actually very speachless here daughter...the poem made me shiver...makes me hate the man and be glad in the poem he's dead...i'd agree with the little girl...wow...i don't know what to say... dang!! 5/5 |
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Thank you mother...I am really not that great today so yeah... |
by Kate
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Definitely a dark poem and I like the hopeful twist at the end and the surprising strength the little girl has even though her father drops dead. Seems to be her own actions that do so. So it is an interesting twist |
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Thank you sis...I am just in a dark mood right now. I am only got an hour of sleep cause I kept having nightmares of my stepfather. |