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by Baby Rainbow Mar 20, 2013
Sadness, depression /
for the excruciating pain that you caused my young body
to experience with every touch.Pink:
for the innocence you proudly stole without permission
when I was only eight years old. White:
for the absence of colour that you left behind
inside my tainted childhood.Light Grey:
for all the tears I shed in secret,
hoping no one would hear them falling.Dark Grey:
for the sorrow that will remain with me,
growing old inside my memories. Black:
for the deep dark hole that you buried me in;
the hole I live in every day. Saffie
It a lovely poem it's also emotional I love the way you arranged the colours and their emotions.
by Beautiful Tragedy
I like it. i can relate, and i never thought of things this way. good idea. congrats
I like the writing style. Also it's very short yet still full of meaning. Good job.
5/5 I LOVE the ending and I really like how you styled this, its quite clever. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Tara
by Dagmar Wilson
This is a poem I had to read several times.
You nailed this one, very heartbreaking and so true