Eyes in the Mist (Shadorma)

Oooh this is beautiful and I love it:)
The end:P

I really want to write with this form now:)
GREAT JOB!! ;)

I am not really a fan of formed poetry, too restrictive telling you how many syllables you can use and all that malarky.......

However, I am warming to this one.

Very tight, very bright and I think the 'higher still' line was very clever, heightens the pace slightly as you read.
Nice images are aroused when reading this.

good write maples.

If I could elaborate, you know I would...but this is simply beautiful.

Thank you for introducing us to new forms because I just love this! Gonna give it a go!

Sweet, elegant, to the point. Love it!

This is so beautiful, I love the way this flows... It's so smooth. Great job!

Beautiful and very soothing, as well as the setting. Nice work!