Love Is Gone [Etheree]

by Kips2.0   Mar 23, 2013


Dank
with tears,
tears of pain
that you were gone.
My eyes were bloodshot
from crying all night long,
and my world felt so empty.
No one to hold or to cuddle,
for my one and only love was gone
and now I'm alone; utterly depressed.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Stay strong Kips:)

    The form is beautifully done!

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done Kips!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Line 8 has too many syllables, Kips.

    Try " No one to hold or to cuddle"

    Nice work on the Etheree and also good job on letting out your emotions:)

    5/5 Ingrid

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