Jesus (Cinquain)

by Rusheena   Mar 31, 2013


Jesus
Son, healer, king
Dying, saving, rising
Forgiving sin and changing lives
The Christ

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A cinquain consists of five lines, each requiring a certain number of syllables and a specific topic. Line 1: Title (noun) - 2 syllables/ Line 2: Description- 4 syllables/ Line 3: Action- 6 syllables/ Line 4: Feeling (phrase) - 8 syllables/ Line 5: Title (synonym for the title) - 2 syllables

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  • 11 years ago

    by Piogga

    Hi

    I think this is a lovely poem. What I really liked about it is the tone of it. It's calming in a way, plus the form you chose for it is perfect.

  • 11 years ago

    by anand singh

    I am not familiar with the many forms of poetry, but must say that in only a few words you have penned a beauty here.Yes, he is all that and more, he's our savior.
    an enjoyable read.

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Oh my gosh I forgot about Cinquains!!

    THIS WAS PERFECT!!...amazing topic, amazing words, I absolutely would not change a thing or pick another form for this...Beautiful!!

    Never lose faith! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Well you created a lovely formed piece here.. the message is very spiritual and the form added the perfect touch. I admire poetry that sings of a souls spirituality... Beautiful piece!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is very impressive, I have not yet been brave enough to do this form.

    You matched the rules spot on. Well done

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