by Leo May 2, 2013
category :
Life, society /
other
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It's your Eyes, they say |
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I liked the format of this poem with the repetition at the start of each stanza, but my favorite line is "It's your Eyes, always your Eyes" for it conjures up more images in my mind to be told. Nice job. |
by Leo
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Thank you. Baby steps! |
by Stanlee
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Beautiful! |
by Leo
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Thank you :) |
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Wow that had a lot to say, I like the format you put the poem, how you begin each verse. Beautifully writte |
by Leo
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Thank you Cathy, for your kind words. |