Butterfly

If only i knew how to edit it so it can be better, i cat seem to find how its done

Great job, Meena already pointed out the flaws of this work, so I do not need to do so.

This is a wonderful piece, do write more.

Butterflies are beautiful to watch and their colors attract us...liked what you have penned and just wanted to point out some things.

Slowly your flourishing

^^slowly you're/ you are

as you tourch that flower

^^typo: touch

your fliping your wings-

^^you're flipping your wings

It is good to see you writing more...keep penning..take care :)