Bad Blood [Shadorma]

Ohh, this is really good. it shows the process of someone who is possessed almost! like their blood is just bad and they only feed from evil and causing pain.

Loving these poems girl!

REALLY loved that it got to the point but still described everything my dear 5/5

Another totally fabulous piece. You're looking into the eyes of a murderer in these pieces that you're writing. It's so intriguing.

"Wicked ambition
will lead to murder."

That was pretty clever. Using wickedness and ambition. Like evil desires. I just love your vocabulary. I've said that to you before, but I do.

I also love you using heat in these pieces instead of referencing cold, like so many crime poems do -- though it's good, you're packing a harder, more intense punch somehow.

Always brilliant!