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by Rusheena   May 22, 2013


[EXT. Phone call from a pay phone]

3:05AM: "How will I be able to contact you?"
3:05AM: "It's too dangerous, Jen."

[Pause. Crying.]

3:06AM: "But I need to know you're okay. Please, just--"
3:06AM: "No. They can't trace you to me. I don't know what I'd do, if they... It's better if you don't know where I am."
3:07AM: "But, Adam, I--"
3:07AM: "I said no! -- I'm sorry. I--"

[Crying.]

3:08AM: "Look, I'm sorry, Jen, but we have to stick to the plan, or else they'll figure out--"

[Unidentifiable noises.]

3:10AM: "Jen, run! Ru--"
3:10AM: "Adam? Adam?!"

[Dropped call.]

Law & Order: SVU themed title challenge by Baby Rainbow/Saffie

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  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Ohhh cliff hanger ending, love to see this is poems but it is very rarely done. I do hate when they do this in the programme though and make you wait until the following week before you find out what happened lol.

    Again, this shows great creativity on your part and shows what you can do from a title.

    Keep this up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    I'm confused by this as the last one. There's nothing I can pull definite conclusions from. Omg.

    Executive Producer
    Rusheena

    ^Totally how I feel right now. LOL. ;) With the cliffhanger endings and such, leaving everyone on edge with no answers! I NEED A SEQUEL! Haha. :)

    I do love how the reader gets to pretty much create their own storyline with this poem because you don't give any specific details whatsoever about what is going on. Very creative.

    • 10 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Thanks again, ladies! Might take some time for a sequel, but I can make that happen :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Omg! This was absolutely brilliant! I always love scenes with a payphone and then the mystery of the whole conversation...why are they using payphones, why is he on the run, and who is chasing him...and then of course what happens when the call drops! It lets the reader pretty much create their own story!

    Like I said, brilliant! <3

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