If women and men could switch places
by shannon May 25, 2013
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If i was your man and you were my girl i would make sure i lied to you and promised you ve whole world if i came home late i would pretend i stayed at work until a quarter past eight i would do everything in my power to make you believe what was never really in my heart to achieve if i were your man and you where my girl i would make sure i hurt you just like you hurt me i would promise you a life that would be meaningless to me |
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10 years ago
by Everlasting
This piece needs some punctuation or to take advantage of line breaks. Other than that, i find it sad... Though I agree with the above comment... it's more of a sardonic piece. I gathered that perhaps, if women switched places with men... I guess they would do the same -.- just to see how they felt? hmm... I guess I could take this piece content into different directions.
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10 years ago
I don't think this is a funny poem, more of a sardonic piece. It has some soul and anger behind it.
Good work and I'm not sure what the word is supposed to be at 'you ve'. "would make sure i lied to you and promised you ve whole world"
You the whole world?
Either way I enjoy the atmosphere you can taste anger. 5/5
