A mom?

by crystaljean88   May 31, 2013


You call yourself a mother,
a person that loves and nurtures.

your not who you should be,
leaving me angry and unhappy.

tell me once, that you was here,
to show me that you really care.

im hurting deep inside,
our bond together, you denied.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Curtis Young

    I feel the same way with my mother

  • 12 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Very sad and relatable.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    A very emotional piece indeed. Sometimes its difficult to make people understand our happiness and bad times. But I really hope your bond will get on better one day with your mom. Your longing for the mom-bond is evident here.

    Good piece:)

    Keep writing:))

  • 12 years ago

    by ThebutterfliesMuse

    I like this poem so sad though and I can relate sadly my parents I dont have a great relationship with. One flaw in the fifth line was should be were 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Bryana Thomas

    I feel the same ugh mothers

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