Hold On

by Haley Elizabeth   Jul 3, 2013


Hold on little child
Someday your dreams will come true
Hold on child
Someday the nightmares will go away
Hold on child just a little longer
Someday you will be stronger
Just hold on child
You'll get through this mess
Hold on just a second longer
Hold on and you'll soon ne free

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  • 10 years ago

    by dindee

    Hi...great poem...

    =D

    but sorry,,,since PP is a little angel...well i thought i could play...=) the role of a little devil if its ok....

    Until when are you going to hold on??

    when is that someday for the child to be strong??

    how soon is soon for the child to be free??

    ---just hold on??do the child has anything to hold on for that so long??

    (you may take it seriously....the words only....the questions....but dont get mad at me...im just making you confused...hehe...cause you should know where are you going to stand too...)

    loveyah!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Last line: "ne" should be "be" :]

    Beautiful message in such simple, soothing words... I kind of read this as a lullaby as well, words able to be understood by everyone, words that take a lot of meaning in their simplicity. Just saying and encouraging to "hold on" over and over again is inspiration. Things will lighten up and there will be brighter days, it may just take time.

    Good write, take care and keep writing!

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