Less broken

Amazing write. I love it :)

First let me say some of your lines are a bit lengthy, maybe try:

Because every second of every day I learned how to live
without you in every way
And it hurt but I slowly got better
And slowly stopped thinking about you
And slowly, ever so fell out of love
with the person I thought meant forever

I stopped thinking about us
And I started thinking about me
That doesn't mean I don't think
of all we used to be
Because this time I fixed my own sky and ive sown together my own stars
Because I realized that maybe
I could fix myself
Maybe I could do this on my own

And I slowly became less broken
and more together
I learned how to get along on my own
I guess I fell out of love with you
long ago because you, you are not you anymore because you have not yet learned how to fix yourself
But I can show you how to be fixed
just like you showed me how to be broken

I don't know, I guess I'm just saying you should play a little more with it. Other than that its a decent poem, the wording could be stronger, but thats a personal prefrence. Your style was ok and your theme was well approached. The piece was a bit weak, but I suppose emotion made up for that.

4/5 from me