Dark world

by Rose   Aug 6, 2013


My dark world
where i see not with my eyes
but with my pain

my dark world
where i smell not with my nose
but with regret

my dark world
where i smile not with my lips
but with tears running down my face

my dark world
where pain is a relief
anger is the only feeling
tears are my hugs
and were
death is my paradise.

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  • 12 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Exellent paradoxes expressed here, though I would personally cut it short and only keep

    "My dark world
    where i see not with my eyes
    but with my pain

    my dark world
    where i smell not with my nose
    but with regret

    my dark world
    where i smile not with my lips
    but with tears running down my face "

    Beautiful poem 5/5

    Dean-x

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Imagery is my favorite part of every poem and you execute it wonderfully here. i am absolutaly in love with this poem. it is so on my favs list

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Imagery is my favorite part of every poem and you execute it wonderfully here. i am absolutaly in love with this poem. it is so on my favs list

    • 12 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you Angel.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you Angel.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you Angel.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you Angel.

  • 12 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Wonderful piece. I love the darkness.

    • 12 years ago

      by Rose

      Thank you wintersangel

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