Dark world

Exellent paradoxes expressed here, though I would personally cut it short and only keep

"My dark world
where i see not with my eyes
but with my pain

my dark world
where i smell not with my nose
but with regret

my dark world
where i smile not with my lips
but with tears running down my face "

Beautiful poem 5/5

Dean-x

Imagery is my favorite part of every poem and you execute it wonderfully here. i am absolutaly in love with this poem. it is so on my favs list

Imagery is my favorite part of every poem and you execute it wonderfully here. i am absolutaly in love with this poem. it is so on my favs list

Wonderful piece. I love the darkness.