Heavy Heart

Judging comment:

This poem really made me think -- the beginning gives me the strong sense of be sure not to judge as we are all a flawed people. This poem had some very serious undertones and much sadness. Locally, a cop was gunned down and it has been a tragic, tragic loss for the police force and all involved -- this poem immediately made me think of the senseless act we've watch unfold in front of our eyes, and believe it's something every one can unfortunately relate to. This poem has enough mystery to it that it can be formed into our own interpretation and I appreciate that as a reader. Very well done piece of poetry!

I agree, this is simple but deep meaning.
keep writing like this..

Interesting poem... I was really curious about this poem.
This line was my favorite:
"Anger has seldom a reason or rhyme"
^^ this really spoke to me. Sometimes people do get angry for no reason or it is due to another reason than what the other person thinks it to be.

I liked this poem a lot! Well done

Mysterious yet poignant