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by Kevin Jan 16, 2014
Love, romance /
The Moons not your gravity,
no that's just a theory,
you've got your own to weigh you
and oh how it does in wave upon wave.
I'm water you know,
and water loves gravity,
oceans of reasons I pull such effection.
You make the waves and feel the spray,
I love the motion never have to say
by Ben Pickard
Lovely, heartfelt write. Well written.
Ooh la la. Such attraction.
I suck at writing comments, but I wanted you to know I read this and enjoyed it.
Excellent title. Did it inspire the poem or the other way round?
by Maple Tree
I really am impressed with this love poem! The senuality is truly a breath of fresh air! Its creative and fun!
I really like how you mixed the words of effect and affection .. that is something that is refreshing to see!
I really wish this was in another category so I can nominate this... however it's in the correct category for sure.. I just really, really adore this poem and wanted to express that!
Thanks a lot there Jyoti.
This poem is about my lover. The Moon does have gravity, but my girl has her own and it is more powerful in effecting her.
I also didn't make a spelling mistake with the word "effection". I know it isn't a word. It is a mix of the word "effect" and "affection".
Thanks for commenting.