A Test in Life ( Challenge from ADreamer )

by Everlasting   Feb 1, 2014


In summer memories,
You are like dripping honey
dangling from a spoon
into my lips.

Yet I'm here - aloof,

Shield in a tower
that stretches thoughts
from blades of grass to blades of grass
into a secret muse,
I call the sky:

The overflow of bitter superstition
built brick by brick
by an attention seeker,
a puppy love,
that made out of my mind
an architecture,

in the blackboard where I write.

And now
you are like dripping honey
dangling from my lips
into the ground.

Feb 1, 2014

Words to used:

I'm here, puppy love, muse, secret, and tower(s)
superstition, blackboard, test, aloof, shield, overflow, bitter, summer memories, dripping honey, and attention seeker.

--- I couldn't use " Test " in the poem so I used it as the title, not sure if that counts.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    You are a good poet good joooob here

  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Ohhh, I did enjoy this very much. You have made
    good use with the words given making this read a memorable one!

    Shield in a tower
    that stretches thoughts
    from blades of grass to blades of grass
    into a secret muse,
    I call the sky:

    ^^I like the imagery here. There is a soothing tone to it which brings on a smile.

    The overflow of bitter superstition
    built brick by brick
    by an attention seeker,
    a puppy love,
    that made out of my mind
    an architecture,

    ^^This one stood out for me, not sure why, maybe because of the various images of a new love.

    All in all liked this read :)

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