YOU NEVER APPRECIATES.

by Thandie   Feb 22, 2014


I tried to be a good girl
but you never appreciates it.
I tried to respects you
but you never appreciates it.
I tried to obey you
but you never appreciates it.

I did all my best to make you happy
but you never appreciates my effort.
I did well at school to make you happy
but you did not appreciate it.

I honestly don't know what to do.
I've tried,but its all seem useless
because you don't appreciates anything l do.
I will never force you to appreciates all my efforts l did
but know that all l did l did it for you.
I wanted to make you happy but you never appreciates my work.

Maybe if l die you will appreciates me or my action..

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  • 8 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

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  • 8 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Some small nitpicks here..
    on the third stanza up to the last paragraph i think its best you remove the 's' in appreciates same goes with the title

    (I tried to be a good girl
    but you never appreciates it.
    I tried to respects you
    but you never appreciates it.
    I tried to obey you
    but you never appreciates it.

    I did all my best to make you happy
    but you never appreciates my effort.)

    appreciates... try "appreciated"

    anyways.. i think this poem speaks so much of how a teenager feels. No matter how much it hurts we should never give up on life, theres always a sun after a rain.
    I can really relate on this one, i wanted to make a poem like this but i just cant find the right words, i think you did a good job :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    Very sad talking about this girl who does everything just to some knowledge that she is loved sad yet beautiful p&l midnight sky