Does anyone care

This one is very good! Simple out take on your very deep feelings! You do this quite well in your poems! - Keep it up.

Perhaps revise your grammar a bit and spelling. It should be 'you're' instead of 'your'. As in, 'you are there'.

And maybe it would flow a bit smoother in the third stanza by switching, 'so i wonder' into 'so now I wonder' :)

Yes.

It might not seem like anyone cares but thats what friends are for to tell you they care when there is a doubt in your mind