Who The F* Are You!?

by LittleMsPink   Apr 18, 2014

I love this girl with all my heart
and every bits of me
She made me feel so special
like no one ever did

She's perfect from head to toe
Theres no defects you'd find
An angel w/ no wings
"One of a kind"

She outshines the rest
Her smile is such a view
But I guess none of that matters,
To a 'worthless guy' like "You"

How can you make my angel cry?
And break her heart in two?
Do you know my angel's worth?
Do you even have a clue!?

Who Are You?, I ask...
Who are you to break her heart?
The masterpiece that God has made
from some place up above

Who are you, to even make her cry?
You cant replace the tears she've shed
Not even with your life

Shes far too valuable
You're lucky you were loved !
Something I wished i've had,
and still dream of

But you crushed my dream,
left it hanging,
My heart now breaks in two
So answer me for im now pissed

~* O.O ohkay.. this is different from the things i made so far...
i hope you guys like it, i'd appreciate your comments and rates
xoxo <3


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  • 5 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Love the attitude throughout this poem, you have so much power and emotion within your words. Wow just wow! A great write with such a interesting twist. It's so unique and I loved the way you had it flow together.

  • 6 years ago

    by Joe Davila

    Wow thats strong!

  • 6 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    Omg I love this poem the raw rmotions the imagery the tone oh Lord I love everything is perfect 5/5 from me


  • 6 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This is a really interesting poem. It seems like you went back and forth between three characters. Yourself, the person who is the "bad" person and this girl you love. It seemed like through out the poem you are trying to talk or yell at the person who you love and describe how much you love her at the same time. I think the main point though was the yelling. I enjoyed this because you show the reader how much you care about this person and it seems to be a lot! I loved the use of angel as well because that tells me you think they are very beautiful and it's ironic because angels are supposed to be protectors but you are saving her...so uyou are her angel. :)