Love the attitude throughout this poem, you have so much power and emotion within your words. Wow just wow! A great write with such a interesting twist. It's so unique and I loved the way you had it flow together.
This is a really interesting poem. It seems like you went back and forth between three characters. Yourself, the person who is the "bad" person and this girl you love. It seemed like through out the poem you are trying to talk or yell at the person who you love and describe how much you love her at the same time. I think the main point though was the yelling. I enjoyed this because you show the reader how much you care about this person and it seems to be a lot! I loved the use of angel as well because that tells me you think they are very beautiful and it's ironic because angels are supposed to be protectors but you are saving her...so uyou are her angel. :)