Just Yesterday

by LittleMsPink   Aug 22, 2014


It was just yesterday...
When i held your hand
While hearing the waves
We walked on the sand...

It was just yesterday....
When i felt your embrace
While you looked in my eyes
Carressing my face...

It was just....yesterday...
When you told me you love me
We said we'll get married...
We we're so happy...

So why are you there?
You've been sleeping for hours,
Wearing a white dress,
Surrounded by flowers..

Why wont you wake up?
Are you so tired?
Please open your eyes
My baby, my bride...

They told me to move on
They said that you drowned...
I know your just sleeping
So princess, make a sound...

I'll wait for you to wake up...
We'll start all over again
I'll wait for you forever...
I know i can...

~inspired by two couples named Michelle Ann Bonzo & Hiro Mallari... i was trying to speak whats in the heart of the guy.... the girl died just a few days ago...and seeing how much the guy loves her breaks my heart ...
R.I.P. Michelle Ann Bonzo(8/19/14)

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  • 3 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, this is a sad story, Kababayan. And you have presented it beautifully that it hurt so much.

  • 5 years ago

    by NiXiT

    This was a beautiful piece - another favorite from you. I totally understood what was happening through the entire thing but the description at the bottom added to the emotional depth of the piece as well.

    5/5 and Keep on writing

  • 5 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Amazing poem pink.....you really must have understood what he was feeling to write such a poem

  • 5 years ago

    by Mihir Deshmukh

    Beautifully presented

  • 5 years ago

    by Lemon

    Such a touching poem, it must be very painful to lose someone like that, especially so unexpectedly. It would be hard to come to terms with a reality like that, which you displayed well through the denial in the poem, the insistence that the girl is only sleeping.

    The only thing I'm not so keen on is the last line. 'Cause' sounds a bit informal and in love should have a space. But aside from the grammar, I just don't think it fits as well as the rest of the poem. It interrupts the flow a little, in my opinion.

    Beautiful poem though :)

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